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Meandering Through the Writings of others as a Lament Practice: The Woman from Away

“Pylons at the Shipyards” Phone Photo

Deborah Stephan

Caplan, Richard, Ed. The Woman from Away: The Collected Writings of Cape Breton’s Tessie Gillis, 2 Novels, 4 Stories and a Family History. 2009.

757 Words

The story of Tessie Gillis is well known. She succeeded in getting electricity for the whole community. *** She was determined to write yet found time to write only after she was stricken with heart disease, confined to one room and an oxygen tent, living in rural Cape Breton Island. *** She had been writing since 1962. ***She contacted Evelyn Garbary (about a writing course) who became her friend, her editor and eventually her dedicated promoter, who had loved her talent alive. ***Tessie saw none of this. She died in 1972. *** This book is a work of fiction; becoming a Cape Breton established classic *** She dared to write of dark hardscrabble life, of rural distances and pain, of alcoholism and domestic abuse. *** Dedicated to her daughter Helen Gillis McLeod and her first editor, Evelyn Garbary.*** Tessie was a vibrant, observant, courageous woman from away, brought to Cape Breton by her husband Joe. *** He found her in New York City, a knowledgeable ranch girl raised in Montana. *** manuscripts, friendships, new eyes, race portrait *** Advice: detail, religious conviction *** You are now taking the right word and no longer using hackneyed phrases. *** Suggest these convictions and experiences and show what happened as a result. *** I can make people feel. *** Advice: Use them in a way that no one else could. *** I was only her amanuensis and the clerk of the spirit that informed her. *** Use exact words you hear spoken. *** a revel in the sweetness of cleanliness *** Advice: Swear then get to work. *** When you write as a man you are tremendous (literature). *** She gained confidence. She began to see for herself how she could gently ‘manipulate her material’. *** women’s work, women’s experience *** Keywords: American entertaining, Highland Games, stream of visitors *** washtub, teas, listening, children, strength, parchment *** staccato, God, bottle, frost, hay *** crimson, visitors, yellow, black, ill, see, friends, stiff, nerve pills *** beer, dead, know, help *** herself, nerves, mental, operate *** unbearable, politeness, bread, churning, heart *** cookies, sorry, worrying, bottle, mass *** die, birds, Glen, snow, ladies, pain, call, answer, priest *** heart, can’t, help, understood, doctor, scream, priest, stay *** arteries, home, children, work, hospital, bed, looking *** glass, gifts, accept, cursing, crying, gone *** God, write, prepare, snow, heifer, ice-laden, forbidding, home, folks *** I was the only woman wearing high heels. *** thirty, burden, magazines, heels, country *** likes, land, railroad, remote, fish, hat, refreshment, Canada, hugging, border *** baggage, ruffles, feathers, stove, webs, women *** elegant, dirty, filigree, handkerchief, compartment, smoker *** Scottish, laughing, slowness, painted *** They didn’t have time for gardening I suppose. Why wouldn’t that woman on the train speak to me, Jim? *** overnight, smoker, violin, tune, drinking, dancing *** rattling, track, engineer, trees, fiddle *** jack, smile, cap, twinkled, red, blue, cherry *** kiss, chore, table, blessed, party stage, love, breath, sips, mellow, guitar, ballad *** perform, pipes, cushion, kitchen, kettle, fire *** lots of dialogue in dialect *** expertly stripped each one of the news they had. *** use of caps throughout for loud speaking *** house, grass-grown, gaunt, sagged *** guests, rickety, twisted, rotted, rust *** bedstead, painted, straw *** home, thatch, flannel, saw, cut *** Everyone danced for the sheer love of dancing. *** flue, meticulously, staircase, water, washstand, reservoir *** drill, path, rock, supper *** cave-in, star, church, bucket, horse, hay *** mare, rats, cats, puppies, chicks, wagon *** stable, shepherd, Mary and Joseph, Jesus, happiest *** orphanage, cheerful, chatter *** smiled, hugged, moonshine, laughed *** moon, miracle, night groans, Christmas, doll *** visiting , catalogue *** One by one the guests were urged to perform. ***  Angus took his fiddle and began to play. *** Gaelic, speed, rhythm, children *** anthracite, tables, window, dancers, velvet, lace *** lamp, soot, cracked, empty *** cake, apples, sleigh *** cold, children, bed, lantern, straw, calf, beauty *** Glen, duck, priest, pain, blessing *** illegitimate, guilt, raised, will, farm *** peacock, hills, relaxed, threw, exit *** Rhythm of the rubbing on the washboard . . . ***  tub, radio, credit *** suds, rain, pain, baths, spanking *** horses, engineer, priest, traveling, snow *** place, nightfall, prayers, handkerchief, coffin, lace *** prayers were for thanksgiving *** Spanking them was hard to do but I have to do it or we won’t have any paper on the walls. *** It 

was said of old Jennie that a touch of her hand and a willow would stop weeping. *** 

Meandering Through the Writings of Others as a Lament Practice: Hebrew Scriptures, I Kings to II Chronicles

“Bridge from the Gallery” DS

As I write today and play with words, I notice that there is a strand of three to my writing: Scriptures, the tales of others in novels, and a touch of my own story. This is abundant life. Here are my explorations:

Hebrew Scriptures: I Kings to II Chronicles

Latticework

Pillars

Four hundred pomegranates

Ten movable stands

Ten vats

Pots, shovels, basins

Made of burnished bronze

Honest confession

She decided to test him with some

Hard questions

Which way did he go?

There will always be plenty of flour and oil

Left in your containers

Young prophets of

Bethel Seminary

What wish shall I grant you

Before I am taken away?

Feed one hundred men with

Only this?

You aren’t to blame,

He told them.

As soon as the body touched

Elisha’s bones

The dead man revived and

Jumped to his feet

You created the heavens

And the earth

A remnant of my people shall become

Strong in Jerusalem

Only the poorest and

Least skilled people were left

In the land

When they wandered from

Country to country

Commandments so you may

Continue to live in this

Good land forever

Who will give himself and

All he has to the Lord

Then they feasted and drank

Before the Lord with

Great joy

A veil of blue and crimson 

Fine-spun linen

Decorated with angels

100 pomegranates attached

To the chains

A bronze altar

Thirty feet long

Thirty feet wide

And fifteen feet high

A huge round tank 

Fifteen feet across

Ten vats for water

Ten gold lampstands

The band and chorus

United as one

The glory of the Lord

Coming as a bright cloud

Filled the Temple

So the priests could not

Continue their work

Humble and pray

Heal their land

Good work will be rewarded

We don’t know what to do

But we are looking to you

Stand quietly and see incredible

Rescue from God

Everyone must pay

For his own sins

Manasseh consulted mediums

And fortune tellers

A did every so rot evil

Warnings from God

Were ignored

Then at last he came to himself

And asked God

For help

I have heard you

And will not send evil

On this city

Build me a Temple

In Jerusalem.